Thursday, July 10, 2008

Ambition

I will go on forever, or so I thought.
Sitting at the helm of the ship
I couldn’t miss the leak
letting the sea in.

I won’t go on forever, or so I thought.
Sitting at the helm of the ship
I couldn’t miss the shore
fast rushing in.

3 comments:

Anonymous said...

after reading this, double edged sword is the only phrase that comes to my mind... profound!!

Dinesh G said...

Thank you for your appreciation. It's inspiring me to write more. There is more I have in ready stock but I haven't published them. I just might, thanks to your erudite comments.

Durga Nandan said...

The question remains.
Did I [Or will I!] ever reach? :)

Portrayed in its all seriousness and wordly beauty. :)